Trying to push the envelope a little...

So a long time ago (ummmm....2009, I think), I went on a shootout with some photographer friends.  My friends Briana and Brian were kind enough to round up a couple models and wrangle us together one night to shoot and have fun.  On this particular night we got rained out of our location and were lucky to find a last minute space indoors in a mattress store.  I would describe the space and lighting as "challenging."  I think I brought one camera, one lens, and maybe one video light.  And I never edited the photographs, just archived them on a hard drive.  However, the model, Monica, is one of my favorites and she really put a lot of effort into working with me, so she deserves to have some photographs from that night.  I finally pulled them up in Lightroom to edit; here they are.  Tell me what you think.